That looks really good ! I could see it working in black with the red skirt, but it might be a bit too much with the black one.
Gold or silver would work well with either, but I have to admit to being a magpie and loving anything shiny and twinkly 😁 Sad that I haven't found a golden or silver wool yet that's soft rather than scratchy or plasticky. But I guess sheep with golden fleeces are the stuff of myth (and prehistoric Cornish or Caucasian mining).