These comedy posts are often complex because many people don’t know the history of how even a little rainfall can cause serious floods in Karachi. The humor can also feel a bit disconnected at times since I assume readers will make certain connections on their own. But with your continuous feedback, I can keep improving my creative writing.
It is a journey for both me and the readers. Please share your honest feedback instead of just praise. This YouTube video makes everything crystal clear while the written version can be a bit more challenging to understand. Also, I can't use AI to touch my writing as it loses its soul and purpose.
Many of the jokes are lost in translation, and it is already energy draining to polish the work again and again after translation, but I still believe it can be improved further. So help me spot where I can make the comedy easier to understand without losing the humor itself.