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RE: 12 March 2026, Freewriters Community Daily Writing Prompt Day 3040 | Prompt: still living with that (sigo viviendo con eso)

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What a touching and well written micro fiction. Part of me wants to scold the neighbours for their gossip, especially considering the weight Charlie has been carrying since the loss of his wife. Yet in another sense, even though the gossip is wrong and unkind, such can spur a much needed change.

I like how Benzie is the turning point for him. Sometimes it takes something or someone we love to make us see what we have been avoiding. Well done. Take care and have a beautiful Sunday. 🌹

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You know @kemmyb grief can manifest itself in many ways. Holding onto items with the feeling of not wanting to let go because it's under your control is one way that spouses handle it when their mate has passed. Sometimes they don't even recognize what is happening until it's overwhelming.

I know that accumulating an inordinate amount of items can lead to hoarding. In your mind's eye, you can't recognize it because surrounding yourself bring comfort. A complex issue that others are hard pressed to understand. Yes, the neighbor's gossip was wrong. But she has attempted to help. In a roundabout way, she finally did, and it sometimes takes that to "wake up" from your comfort.

Thanks so much for your visit and analysis of both sides of the issue. I appreciate it and your support. Take care and have a good rest of your day.

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Holding onto items with the feeling of not wanting to let go because it's under your control is one way that spouses handle it when their mate has passed.

You are right. You explain Charlie's state thoughtfully. Grief does take on many forms and the way everyone handles it can't be the same. Sadly, people outside the situation only see 'the clutter' and not the pain and struggle behind it. Your micro fiction handles this sensitive subject with a lot of empathy. Thanks for sharing it.

You're so welcome.


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