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RE: 23 March 2026, Freewriters Community Daily Writing Prompt Day 3051| Prompt: shout quietly (gritar en voz baja)

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Your stories always present me with a character that stands out and Simone is no exception. The ballroom setting is vivid and you build the tension with an intensity that has me anticipating the fallout. I like how composed she is through it all, making her exit powerful. Though I'm curious about the breaking news. I guess it means there's no hiding place for Jeffery anymore.

A fine and well-written short piece. Thanks for sharing. Do take care and have a beautiful day.

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Yes, Simone leaked the info to the press and perhaps stipulated the time to break the news as Jeffrey was about to give his benevolent speech. I believe he was going to attempt to pin it on her. He was a character with all his skeletons.

Thanks so much for your visit and insight into my characters and theme. I appreciate it. Take care and have a nice rest of your week.

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