Hello @mrprinxcee, This story has good dialogue, which many authors find a challenge. However, the story is way too long, much beyond our recommended length. Please be aware that the curators have many stories to read and cannot accommodate stories of such length. Also, we note that you have commented on only one story this round. As you likely know, we require authors to comment on at least two stories. We have curated this story but do often decline to curate if an author does not engage with others.

Thank you.