Thank you for your kind words, and finding the link ♥️ I added it 👍

I noticed it was a little shorter than recommended, but thought adding unnecessary words would be a disservice to Agmoore, who has helped me so much in learning how to keep a story tight. Perhaps I could have had the father narrate more of the details of his encounter, but would that have helped with the story arc, done nothing, or hurt it?

Looking forward to your feedback, as always 🙏