The never version are those shallow motivation phrases that people in their lifetime crises over a spoiled avocado post on "social" media. Basically boiling down very valid thoughts to a point that they're obviously true, but not really useful. A mere display of fake depth.

That's why your phrases are too long for those motivational stuff. They do preserve some depth. Not a complete essay, but enough to make sense of them. Too much for people used to headlines and platitudes.