Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. I'm enjoying this, and I'm enjoying the tonal shift from dialogue-heavy scenes to a story with just one character stuck inside his mind. I think it's sort of helping me with more descriptive writing, which I think is a weak part of my writing.
Unlike yours, I've always loved your descriptions, you can really paint a vivid picture.
We should definitely do a collab at some point 😁 I write decent descriptions and suck at dialogue, you write awesome dialogue. Goodness knows when we'd find time for it, though, or how we'd arrange a workload where it's literally taking it in turns depending on whether it's dialogue or description !
That would be brilliant! Maybe the best way to do it - rather than scene by scene - would be to make a google doc, and each work on it. It's cool, because we'd be able to see the other person typing in real time.
We could have a bit of a brainstorm prior to it and get the ideas flowing.
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If you ever end up visiting the south of England (I'm sad, I rarely go anywhere.....), we could get together and pass the keyboard back and forth, bouncing ideas around as we go 😁
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