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RE: Just Keep Moving

in The Ink Welllast year

I like the gritty feel of this story. I think the setting is very strong, as it has a near-apocalyptical feel to it.

Separated by weed-filled parking lots and undeveloped plots of land, many of the structures had been abandoned for many years. The empty highway stretched endlessly before him.

I also like how the action is seamlessly revealed through character action without being too flashy and high octane.

As Wade slowly collected the pile of dirty clothes, Styx began to stagger. He ignored her, watching out of the corner of his eye.

By the time he'd gathered everything and headed towards an old but sturdy looking chair, she was on her knees.

This is an enjoyable fast-paced tale.

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This is very high praise, and tells me I'm on the right track :) Thank you so much for the kind words and feedback 🥳