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RE: The Rebel Flare - Part 2 (Short Story)

this feels like a holding chapter, where you've got down the basic outline, but you'll flesh out more detail later.

I hope that's the case as the location you sketch out is interesting and getting a fuller picture of it will add rich texture to the tale.

as a suggestion, if you put links to previous parts it makes it easier to find them